Anyone want to proofread my college essay (lol i doubt it, but im pasting it in!)?

This is so strewn with errors, there is not enough space..."going to France was not only....but a place (surely a journey) and then you are in the SWISS alps so Going to Europe was not only..............The punctuation is shoddy at best....Do you have any idea what a comma, colon or semi-colon is for?